Maybe his brother asks if they want to have lunch together again, but the main character (what's his name?) says that he doesn't remember anything about having a brother. And his brother shows pictures of them together as kids, and it turns out that something happened to the main character (what's his name?) that made him forget everything that happened before he painted that other turtle's house last week. And so the mystery begins...
He says, "You don't need to know who I am" He tells you that the ticket to Turtle Island is only a one-way ticket. At the party you will have to find three turtles with clues to how to get a ticket home. Each turtle will have one third of the three-part clue. Of course, if you don't find your way off the island in three days, it will disappear into the mist with you on it and it won't reappear for 100 years. So you should hurry!
"I tried to contact you before you stepped on the ferry but I was kidnapped. I managed to escape but I might be too late in warning you NOT to go to the party because someone is trying to keep you away from your home and they won't let you leave the island, ever!"
"I am your assistant. You have been chosen to rule Turtle Island and all the creatures on it. This is a great responsiblity because you will have to discover what each inhabitant on the island needs and you will help them achieve it. Sometimes it is something lost that you will have to find. Sometimes it will be a fight between residents that you have to settle. Sometimes you will have to protect someone and make sure everyone is safe and happy. At the party you will be able to meet some of the residents and you will find out what your first challenge will be. I will be around to help you. Welcome and Good Luck!"
Don't you know? I'm your brother! We just had lunch together yesterday!
ReplyDeleteIf that was what you were going to suggest, I would say something along the lines of the story instead of a line a certain character says...
DeleteMaybe his brother asks if they want to have lunch together again, but the main character (what's his name?) says that he doesn't remember anything about having a brother. And his brother shows pictures of them together as kids, and it turns out that something happened to the main character (what's his name?) that made him forget everything that happened before he painted that other turtle's house last week. And so the mystery begins...
DeleteI will make sure to give the main character a name...
DeleteHe is sharing a cabin with rap master MC Shelly Shell. They write a fly rhyme together and perform at the party.
ReplyDeleteUhhhh... Okay....
DeleteHe says, "You don't need to know who I am" He tells you that the ticket to Turtle Island is only a one-way ticket. At the party you will have to find three turtles with clues to how to get a ticket home. Each turtle will have one third of the three-part clue. Of course, if you don't find your way off the island in three days, it will disappear into the mist with you on it and it won't reappear for 100 years. So you should hurry!
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking more along the lines of this being a series that happens on the island. I can't really make a series with this suggestion.
Delete"I tried to contact you before you stepped on the ferry but I was kidnapped. I managed to escape but I might be too late in warning you NOT to go to the party because someone is trying to keep you away from your home and they won't let you leave the island, ever!"
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ReplyDelete"I am your assistant. You have been chosen to rule Turtle Island and all the creatures on it. This is a great responsiblity because you will have to discover what each inhabitant on the island needs and you will help them achieve it. Sometimes it is something lost that you will have to find. Sometimes it will be a fight between residents that you have to settle. Sometimes you will have to protect someone and make sure everyone is safe and happy. At the party you will be able to meet some of the residents and you will find out what your first challenge will be. I will be around to help you. Welcome and Good Luck!"
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